Drinking a moderate amount of caffeine may not do harm to your health. But if you drink too much caffeine, you might have some negative effects on your health. First, you might have insomnia that makes you away from a high-quality sleeping. Second, you might feel nervousness or anxiety when you haven’t drunk caffeine. That shows you are addicted to it. Third, you might nausea or have other gastrointestinal problems. It’s surely bad for your health. Last, you would have a headache with too much caffeine. For the reasons above, you shouldn’t have too much caffeine per day.
Drinking a moderate amount of
回覆刪除這邊應該不用a吧?
you might feel nervousness or anxiety
應該要用形容詞的nervous和anxious
喝咖啡因
回覆刪除怎麼想都覺得奇怪= =
喝咖啡因可以改成攝取咖啡因...
回覆刪除insomnia失眠症的動詞不知道對不對
你可以寫suffer from insomnia
這樣^_^
Second, you might feel nervousness or anxiety when you haven’t drunk caffeine.
回覆刪除nervousness 和 anxiety是名詞噢
改成形容詞nervous anxious~~
you might feel nervousness or anxiety when you haven’t drunk caffeine.
回覆刪除裡的 nervousness 是N喔! 刪掉ness吧
以上~
you might feel "nervousness or anxiety" when you haven’t drunk caffeine.
回覆刪除那是名詞喔!
應該用形容詞nervous or anxious
我也覺得喝"咖啡因"怪怪的
應該是喝"含咖啡因的飲料"
含咖啡因的→caffeinated
首句及頜句＂health＂重複。
回覆刪除在下提議替換首句為＂body＂。
不甚明白文章為何多次使用＂have + p.p.＂。
Third, you might nausea or have other gastrointestinal problems.
＂nausea＂為名詞。
建議＂you might suffer from nausea or other...＂。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
﹡單字的名詞動詞要多注意，建議查清楚詞性再用。
回覆刪除以上，淺見…
Drinking a moderate amount of caffeine動辭改成攝取比較好哦
回覆刪除might feel nervousness or anxiety為什麼feel後面加名詞呢?