2011年6月1日 星期三

Discussing Cause-2

Over the past a hundred years, there has been a huge increase in population. There is several reasons causing this happened. First, advances in medicine and health care decrease the cases that people died because of epidemic. Second, better sanitation and health habits also reduce the happening of epidemic, which can prevent people from being infected. Third, improved farming methods that produce more and better food, which can make people fed. Last, because of enough food and the advanced of medical industry, fewer infant dead, and more people live longer. For these reasons, it is sure that the population increased in the past a hundred years.

8 則留言:

  1. There "is" several reasons causing this happened.
    是are

    Third, improved farming methods that produce more and better food, which can make people fed.
    這句怪怪的
    主要動詞是哪一個??

    fewer "infant" dead
    infant要加s

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  2. There is several reasons causing this happened. First
    裡的is 是are 喔!

    以上~

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  3. There is several reasons causing this happened.
    是are

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  4. 1.Over the past a hundred years...
    ﹡a應該可以拿掉。
    2.There is several reasons causing this happened.
    ﹡is→are

    ﹡以上,淺見…

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  5. Over the past a hundred years...
    在下喜好以"one"代"a"。

    First, ... that people died because of epidemic.
    欲改為"people died from epidemic."

    Third, ... which can make people fed.
    不太懂閣下的意思,是指"使人們飽足"嗎?

    Last, because of...the advanced of medical industry... 請教一下,"advanced"可以做名詞嗎?

    如有誤,請不吝嗇指教。

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  6. There "are" several reasons causing this happened

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  7. Over the past a hundred years
    感覺沒有a比較順@@(不確定

    上面的are大家都說摟~~~

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  8. There is several reasons 是are哦
    the advanced of medical industry應該是advance吧

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