2011年4月27日 星期三
Comparing-2
There are two stores selling ladies hoodies which are alike. Both of the two hoodies are machine washable. And the color provide by the two stores are alike. And the material of LOURIE'S is similarly to the GREEN'S. And the size are the same, both range from 4 to 11. Also, LOURIE'S is the same price as GREEN'S. Without the pattern, the two kinds fo ladies hoodies are almost the same.
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And the color provide by the two stores are alike.
回覆刪除＂provide＂應該用被動＂provided＂。
如有誤，請不吝嗇指教。
And the color provide by the two stores are alike.
回覆刪除provide要改成provided哦:D
And the color provide by the two stores are alike.
回覆刪除provide 應該要改成 provided
And the material of LOURIE'S is similarly to the GREEN'S.
應該是similar
the two kinds fo ladies hoodies are almost the same.
應該是of
連接詞可以多一點變化 ^^
And the color provide by the two stores are alike.
回覆刪除裡的provide 要加+d喔
以上~
可以用一些不同的連接詞
回覆刪除然後provide要改成provided
1.And the color provide by the two stores are alike.
回覆刪除→And the color provided by the two stores are identical. (這邊因為前面已有提到alike，個人習慣換字…)
2.And the material of LOURIE'S is similarly to the GREEN'S.
→In addition, the material of LOURIE'S is similar to the GREEN'S.
3.And the size are the same, both range from 4 to 11.
→Moreover, the sizes of the two are the same, which both range from 4 to 11.
4.Without the pattern, the two kinds fo ladies hoodies are almost the same.
→Without the pattern, the two kinds of ladies hoodies are almost the same.
﹡由於句子裡有許多And，所以我幫妳換掉了幾個…
不過並沒有用什麼比較艱深或有深度的字，如不滿意建議自行換掉哦。
(以上，淺見…)
provide要用過去式
回覆刪除沒了= =
And the color "provide" by the two stores are alike.
回覆刪除被動provided