2011年4月6日 星期三
Describing a Process-(4) How to Plan a Party
It is very easy to plan a party by following those steps. First, you have to chose the object for your party. And you would realize what you should prepare for the party. Second, make a list to check who you would like to invite. Then you don't have to worried about if the person is not suitable for this party. Third, make sure what those guests you invite would like to eat or drink. Or those who you invite would not satisfied with food and drink you perpare. Last, decorate the place you would hold your party and make sure it would correspond with your object. By following those steps, you can plan a party easily.
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First, you have to chose the object for your party.
回覆刪除→"chose" 應該是"choose"。
→"object"…在下覺得 "subject"比較好吔。
Second, make a list...who you would like to invite.
"who" 應該改成 "whom"。
Then you don't have to worried about...
→...don't have to be worried about...
...drink. Or those who you invite would not satisfied with... 我會改三個地方:
...drink, or those whom you invite would not be satisfied with...
以上★
Or those who you invite would not "be" satisfied with food and drink you perpare
回覆刪除decorate the place you would hold your party
→decorate the place where you would hold your party
應該要有"where"
或後面加"in"
應該用"these" tips比較好吧!!!
回覆刪除object似乎不怎麼恰當
第三行應該是"whom" you would like~~~
最後一行也用these比較恰當
First, you have to chose the object for your party.
回覆刪除其中的過去式chose要改成原形choose哦
Then you don't have to worried about if the person is not suitable for this party.
這句worried的前面要加個be~~~
Or those who you invite would not satisfied with food and drink you perpare.
這句satisfied的前面也要加個be哦
YA鬱卒同桌愛妳XD
First, you have to chose the object for your party.
回覆刪除裡的chose是choose喔!
Second, make a list to check who you would like to invite.
裡的who我會寫whom
Then you don't have to worried about if the person is not suitable for this party.
裡的worried 欠面+個be吧!
以上!
大發啦!
It is very easy to plan a party by following those steps , those 應該要改 these比較適合
回覆刪除would not "be" satisfied with 應該是這樣吧!
Or those who you invite would not satisfied with food and drink you perpare. satisfied要加動詞...
回覆刪除Then you don't have to worried about if the person is not suitable for this party.這一句我絕得怪怪的。
第三句Then you don't have to worried about if the person is not suitable for this party.因為其他地方都用would這裡是不是也用would會比較好呢?
回覆刪除1.First, you have to chose the object for your party.
回覆刪除→First, you have to choose the object for your party.
2.Second, make a list to check who you would like to invite.
→Second, make a list to check whom you would like to invite.
3.Then you don't have to worried about if the person is not suitable for this party.
→Then you don't have to be worried about if the person is not suitable for this party.
4.Or those who you invite would not satisfied with food and drink you perpare.
→Or those who you invite would not be satisfied with food and drink you perpare.
(以上,淺見…)