2011年4月27日 星期三

Comparing-2

There are two stores selling ladies hoodies which are alike. Both of the two hoodies are machine washable. And the color provide by the two stores are alike. And the material of LOURIE'S is similarly to the GREEN'S. And the size are the same, both range from 4 to 11. Also, LOURIE'S is the same price as GREEN'S. Without the pattern, the two kinds fo ladies hoodies are almost the same.

Comparing-1

Though John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are born in different period, they still have some characteristics are alike. Both of John Adams and Thomas Jefferson died on July 4, 1826. Similarly, they are important person in the American Revolution. And John Adams is the same president of United States as Thomas Jefferson. Likewise, they are the signer of Declaration of Independence. John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are alike in delegate to the Continental Congress. John Adams had studied and practiced law which is similarly to Thomas Jefferson. I think they only have little difference.

Describing a Person-revised

I went aboard with my family. However, on our journey, my brother got lost. Since we wanted to find him back, we went everywhere we had been to. But we couldn't find him anywhere. So we went to the police station for help. And the police asked us to discribe what he looked like. We told the police that he was teenaged, about eighteen years old. In addition, he was very thin and only weighted fifty kilograms. Also, he was medium height, about 172 centimeters tall. His hair was black and straight. After these discriptions, the police promised that they would try to find him as soon as possible.

Describing a Process-(4) How to Plan a Party-revised

It is very easy to plan a party by following these tips. First, you have to choose a subject for your party. And you will realize what you should prepare for the party. Second, make a list to check whom you will like to invite. Then you don't have to be worried about if the person is suitable for this party or not. Third, make sure what those guests you invite would like to eat or drink, or they will not satisfied with food and drink you perpare. Last, decorate the place where you will hold your party and make sure it will correspond with your subject. By following those steps, you can plan a party easily.

2011年4月20日 星期三

Giving Reasons

My favorite holiday is Christmas. First reason is because Christmas makes me feel comfortable ane warm. Family and friends get together to celebrate this holiday. The second reason is that people would change presents to express their love or something others. And changing present is very exciting, because you would never know what you would get. The third reason is that family members would prepare so many delicious food which is not ordinary.  With those reasons upon, Christmas is my favorite holiday.

2011年4月13日 星期三

Describing a Person

I went aboard with my family. However, on our journey, my brother got lost. Since we wanted to find him back, we went to every where we had been to. But we couldn't find him anywhere. So we went to police station for help. And the police asked us to discribe what he looked like. We told the police that he was teenaged, about eighteen years old. And he was very thin, he was weight only fifty kilograms. Also, he was medium height, about 172 centimeters tall. His hair was black and straight. After these discriptions, the police promised that they would try to find him as soon as possible.

2011年4月6日 星期三

Describing a Process-(4) How to Plan a Party

It is very easy to plan a party by following those steps. First, you have to chose the object for your party. And you would realize what you should prepare for the party. Second, make a list to check who you would like to invite. Then you don't have to worried about if the person is not suitable for this party. Third, make sure what those guests you invite would like to eat or drink. Or those who you invite would not satisfied with food and drink you perpare. Last, decorate the place you would hold your party and make sure it would correspond with your object. By following those steps, you can plan a party easily.