Explaining a Process-3

If you would like to go the Graff House from the Visitor Center, follow these directions. First, go down the Chestnut Street on the West for five blocks. Then turn right at the Seventh Street on your right for one block.  And you can find it on your left.

Explaining a Process-2

You can do a easy solar energy experiment to show that black is a better collector of solar energy than white. What you need is 2 tin cans, black and white paint, and room thermometer. First, paint the cans-one black, one white. Next, fill the cans with water. Then, put the cans in direct sunlight for three hours. Finally, check the temperature of the water in the cans and compare. It will prove that the temperature of the water in the black can is higher. And you can use this conclusion in your daily life.

Explaining a Process-1

It is easy to pot a plant if you follow the right procedure. First, cover bottom of pot with small stones. Next, put two inches of soil on top of rocks. Then, make a hole in centerof soil. After that, drop plant into soil. When the plant drop into soil, add soil until it almost reaches top of pot. And press the soil down with thumbs. At last, water plant. After these right procedure, you can put your pot at wherever you like.

An unforgettable trip_revised

It was on the winter vacation that I went to Taipei. I woke up at 6 a.m. for I was very excited. This was my first time to have a trip but go without my family. When I got to the passenger transport, my friends had already been there and waited for me. On the way to Taipei, I was miserably got carsick because I ate some cookies. After we arrived in Taipei, we went to a display. The display exhibit not only  paintings but also other artistic productions. Until evening, the night market must be one of the most important activities. Just like other passengers, we went to Shihlin night market, and ate many kinds of food. The next day, we went to the book exhibition. There were a lot of books, and merchandise of novels and I bought lots of them. At 4:00 p.m. we got on a bus whick return to Tainan. We were all tired when we got back, but it was still an exciting trip.

An unforgettable trip

It was the winter vacation that I went to Taipei. I woke up at 6 a.m. for I was very excited. This was my first time to have a trip but went without my family. When I got to the passenger transport my friends were already been there and waited for me. On the way to Taipei, I was miserably got carsick due to I ate some cookies. After we arrived Taipei, we went to a display. The display was not only exhibit paintings but also others artistic productions. Until evening, the night market must be one of the most important activities. Just like others passengers, we went to士林 night market, and had eaten many kinds of food. The next day, we went to the book exhibition. There were a lot of people, books, and merchandise of novels. I bought lots of books and merchandise. At 4:00 p.m. we got on a bus back to Tainan. We were all tired when we got back, but it was still an excited trip.

The story I had read in my childhood-revised

  The story I had read in my childhood is Prey. The story was began in a office of a group of scientists. They had created some objects which were formed by billions of 奈米塵埃. After a long time doing experiment, they found that the objects began to have its own consciousness. As time passed by, those 奈米塵埃had grown more intelligent and cunning. But those objects needed to resupply some energy. As the result, those objects started to attack human beings and ate them. So the scientists had not only to escape from the objects but also eliminate them. At the end, some of the scientists survived, but most of them died in those objects' attack. This story was so interesting that had impressed me a lot.

老師...我的是看到有人給訂正就去改...所以來不及分成兩篇就改完了...所以就沒有分2篇...